All Comments on 'Turnons - A Game of Dares Ch. 03'

I like the story, read it when you published it first, and happy you are bringing it back

Can I have more please?

Hi, more is coming: I just submitted chapter 4, do it should be published in a couple of days I guess, and an updated version for this chapter because of an inconsistency I forgot to fix in the review.

This chapter seems a good appetizer for the next one. I hope my feeling is right. 5 stars

Wonderful story so far. Love the build and escalation. And the use of Marcuse!

Very happy you decided to post these. I’m guessing you like to write in short bursts - if that’s what makes you productive then awesome! Personally I like to read things when they’re complete because it’s very hard coming back to a story and getting it to it, only to have it end a chapter later.

what a problem she is having. love how this is going.. I was a teacher for a bit and would have died.. love how you build this story. awesome job

I´m surprised that turnons doesn´t have a function to protect worklife. At least for the flashs.

I mean yeah... it´s exciting and stuff... but a ruined carreer is hardly good publicity for an app.

Meh. Unreasonable doms punishing you for rejecting their obnoxious unrealistic requests is not only the opposite of hot/erotic, it’s a major RED FLAG, sign of abuse and turn off. No one can “expand your boundaries” if they don’t respect them and acknowledge them first.

How annoying I am are people who measure erotic fantasies by the criteria of real life.

Despite the fact that this is not even the same case. Guy: maybe you want to finish this challenge? And she answered: No. I think this is enough respect for boundaries.