All Comments on 'Turnons - A Game of Dares Ch. 04'

by erotica4theshyexhibitionist

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tanda9876tanda9876about 2 years ago

Great story. Love the build up and feeling of helplessness.

jetfan4lifejetfan4lifeabout 2 years ago

What is the significance of Suzie calling her Professor Marshall?

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

Tbh the story got annoying when subtleg kept asking for flash dares non stop and i didn't like the rest after that but oh well

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

Jetfan4life she was live streaming at the time. Will make it easier for viewer to find the real her

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

I like the general idea. Alex wants to have some fun im all for that but she shouldn't have her life overly messed with. Just my thoughts thank you for all the hard work put in.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

I really like where this is going. I'm not sure I agree with the other Anon, if it's a noncon story I guess it'd be alright to see her dealing with the consequences of the path she's on, and interesting and exciting too

erotica4theshyexhibitionisterotica4theshyexhibitionistabout 2 years agoAuthor

Hi guys, thanks for your feedbacks. Chapter 5 will be published in a couple of days!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

Love the slow buildup of how the protagonist digs herself deeper into trouble.

Keep it up.

billie34cbillie34calmost 2 years ago

So close to home for me. Please continue.

desire30desire30almost 2 years ago

i i feel like i don't want this story to end...

PRNP3PPRNP3Pover 1 year ago

Love the story and i'm curious how this will unfold. I prefer a bit more focus on character descriptions and development though the situation and buildup do make it extremely exciting. Hope there'll be more girl-girl moments like in this chapter, but that's my personal preference. Well done and hope you'll keep at it.

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Loving this series. Please don't ever stop

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