All Comments on 'TV Mistress's Foot Worshiping Slave'

Your domme side is wonderful, natural, and portrayed so well in this story. A very enjoyable tale in which no-one was hurt and those craving degradation were well served.

You did mention this has been written upon request. There are a few items that, altered, would take this story into the top category:

"His one squashed. . ." The previous sentence subject was 'cage,' specifically his cock cage; to continue with "his one" should have been only 'his'.

Footstool's crouch ? Crotch? Spelling error or typo?.

"My left foot stray" perhaps 'strayed,' past tense, to match the rest of the paragraph.

I really enjoy your stories.

Thanks, I can't correct them on here. Once it's on it's on. I write for Bigcloset also, you can go back and correct mistakes on there.

On Lit the stories are checked to make sure they don't have anything disallow in them. This can take several days when they are busy.

I had trouble writing this as it not "my bag".