All Comments on 'Twelve Days a Slave Ch. 07'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 8 years ago

Not into water stuff as drowning is a phobia for me, but again you have given us a well written chapter. The punishment set-ups are rather elaborate. Had they been any more involved or detailed I would say it was too much - derailing the flow. As it is, you stopped just in time.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 8 years ago

Fanciful. Well written. Somewhat erotic but not really. You've done better

AnonymousAnonymousabout 8 years ago
Wow - so this is what the bottom of the pit looks like

Without a doubt your worst work.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 8 years ago
Useless

Useless drivel.

lecturelectureover 1 year ago

Quite enjoyed it. One tends to get bored with floggings, canings etc so other methods are rather interesting.

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I was born in the Midwest, but have traveled extensively throughout the United States and Canada. Currently I am full-time camping throughout the United States and Canada and spending my time writing for both fun and profit. Books with longer stories such as the kind posted on...

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