All Comments on 'Twice Smitten - A Love Story Ch. 02'

by NormaJane

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SomaSlaveSomaSlaveover 1 year ago

I'm not a fan of Incest/Taboo, but you write with a delicateness and sensuality that caught my eye and my mind. I'm particularly enamored of your use of euphemisms and avoidance of vulgarity, Thank you for a lovely story.

AlwaystabooAlwaystabooover 1 year ago
" Now, now, Linda darling, mother, mother, now!"

Such scintillating words. Leaves the unencumbered mind with so many possibilities.

SummoreSummoreover 1 year ago

I really enjoyed your writing and loved the way that you dealt with this taboo subject. If you choose to read my guilt series please leave a comment.

Nigel aka Summore

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Retired but still practising academic, specialist in language and literature. Highly sexed and sexual but not so active in the last few years. Enjoy writing erotic stories, which reveal favourite themes and features.