All Comments on 'Twice Smitten - A Love Story Ch. 04'

Wonderful story.One of the 10 best ever on here.Is it true or not.We will never know.The use of the feminine for after the transition was a little odd but did not take away at all.Well done.

A well written ending to your story. At first, I was put off by the baby talk, but came to realize the language was very much like Nabokov's A Clockwork Orange. Blending the linguistic games with erotica made for a challenging, but ultimately satisfying read. The epilogue was a bit abrupt, but it does provide closure to the story. Thanks, again, for a mind-engaging tale.

Such tender instructions to Leslie and Linda. As the song says "Loves Grown Deep"