All Comments on 'Twin Trouble'

Did Julie have seen with college students or not? Can't be both ways.

Very hot. Yet in the intro the wife is reportedly fucking students. Later in the story it says she never. A little editing is a good thing. I'm glad you are posting again.

Umm:. "...three hundred attorneys and twice that many paralegals, secretaries, and IT staff." Really?!!!!

OK, so I screwed up with Julie. You can stop hitting me over the head with it now. I'm new to this. I'll try to do better.

A bit of continuity checking would/will improve this tale immensely.

Not familiar with your work but have quite enjoyed this piece.

Very hot. More please.