by ViridianDemon
You keep leading us on, but it just goes back to a dude being depressed. For writing to be good, there needs to be a payoff- in a regular book, that's character development or something, here, that should be raucous sex
Its amazing cause there people who actually do this irl. Thank you for an interesting read.
Please hurry and write next parts. I am dying to read what happens next.
Please....