All Comments on 'Twisted Buttfucking Desires Ch. 02'

by ViridianDemon

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 4 years ago
Seriously?

Reads like a teenage melodrama. Barf.

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
Where is the erotica?

You keep leading us on, but it just goes back to a dude being depressed. For writing to be good, there needs to be a payoff- in a regular book, that's character development or something, here, that should be raucous sex

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago

Its amazing cause there people who actually do this irl. Thank you for an interesting read.

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
Please write next parts.

Please hurry and write next parts. I am dying to read what happens next.

Please....

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