All Comments on 'Two as One'

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UltimateHomeBodyUltimateHomeBodyalmost 4 years ago

Enjoyable.

Could have been improved with dialog between them giving her a chance to speak her own thoughts.

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
Nice story

Very nice story,but to short.

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Just going through life doing what I can to give folks some moments of joy....you get back what you give!!