All Comments on 'Two Paths'

by Cyberguy

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amanda in chainsamanda in chainsalmost 20 years ago
A Fantasy To Cum By....Wonderful!

I loved your story....your writing is excellent and your ability to keep your reader wanting more is a gift. I read it all and was surprised at the end...but wished that her Master had wanted her so much he couldn't let her go at the end of the weekend, thus, not being married and not having another woman in the picture. However, even with that...I enjoyed the story...your writing is sooo good. I would love to read more. Thank you.

AnonymousAnonymousover 19 years ago
loved it!

i simply loved ur story.

AnonymousAnonymousover 19 years ago
Disappointing.

F/F does nothing for me, so I was disappointed by the last half of the story, as Victoria was as well.

slutbyname85slutbyname85over 18 years ago
Perfect

I loved your story. Just reading it made me cum 3 times. This fantasy is now one of mine. Absolutely perfect.

GothWannabeGothWannabeabout 18 years ago
Very nice!

Very nice! Definately got me hot.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 18 years ago
Sizzling!

Clearly one of the best stories I have read thus far! Thank You for sharing Your fantastic imagination! Keep up the *GOOD* work. Mystique

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 17 years ago
Just Creamy!

So creamy, I could lick it all up.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 15 years ago
Yum

Thank you for writing this...it's certainly left my fingers wet and sticky ;)

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