All Comments on 'Two Toms and a Brain Cell Ch. 05'

by MothBoi

Sort by:
  • 4 Comments
pretentious_subpretentious_sub10 months ago

OMG, I was waiting for an update on this, and you delivered beyond my expectations!!! This was so fucking hot; I loved the whole dynamic. I hope we see more of this; I am so invested in their relationship and this storyline!!! You are a fantastic writer!!!! I hope I can write a bit more detailed feedback later, rn I am just too horny after reading this story <3

MothBoiMothBoi10 months agoAuthor

@pretentious_sub

Thank you again!! I'm so glad you're enjoying my work! And yes, there'll definitely be more. I have at least 2 more chapters planned, possibly a few more if any of my other chapter ideas turn out good enough.

Detailed feedback is always appreciated of course, but I can understand being too horny to write it lol. If nothing else, I'm flattered that my work had such an effect.

AnonymousAnonymous10 months ago

I burst out laughing at the map game reference, seems it is a passtime of femboys the world across. Great series so far, this is the first time I've felt compelled to comment on a story but I look forward to further instalments.

AnonymousAnonymous9 months ago

Keep up the great writing

Anonymous
Our Comments Policy is available in the Lit FAQ
Post as:
Anonymous
userMothBoi@MothBoi
Hello there. I'm an amateur writer who sometimes writes more erotic stuff. Mainly I write femdom, typically involving some type of monster girl but not always!