All Comments on 'Two Women Again'

The boots made her/them do it. "Winter is coming" after all . ( The mantra of Game of Thrones). Cant be caught out in the cold or the White Walkers will catch you.

Ergo the obvious score

Full marks *****

I'm sure I'd love the boots, myself! 5*. ~~JBE

I missed part one while I was ill. Night have to go back to read that. As much as I like your babysitter tales, this change of pace was nicely done.

Especially liked the deft dialogue and the extended length adding room for detail.

Interesting, as usual. Well written, as usual. slightly erotic, as usual.

Definitely a fantasy

You've got to love some anonymous commenters. Obviously a fantasy! I don't know whether to laugh or cry but I've had similar comments left to my submissions.

Great story, most of yours are. Straight to the point and always enjoyable to read

Loved it. , total control. And definitely love boots myself.