All Comments on 'Ugly Pt. 01: Now What'

Great story. Loved the American-in-Turkey setting. Adept in language -- not have to wade through misspellings, poor grammar, etc.

The plot idea and its execution was intriguing to me.

Improvement? Instead of stating that something was said, give the actual words of the dialogue.

Bravo!

Paul in Oklahoma

Forgot I'd read this story, then saw I had commented! Anyway, that meant I got to read it again as a new story.

It was great getting the actual text of his internet ad. I wished for at least some of the actual wording of the texting. We got the idea of what he and Senem said to each other -- and it was hot. But I was wishing for at least some of their dialog, giving the actual wording.

Easily 5 stars.

Paul in Oklahoma

Great story

4/5