by Adanaliyik
Installment to this saga. Loved the plot line (romantic sex is better than fucking) and the way his new partner is propelled into the action, and then later out of action in order to make room for who comes next.
As in part 1, could improve by much more spoken dialogue in quotes (as opposed to just relating that something was said).
Another 5 stars. Thanks.
Pauli in Oklahoma
Nice addition to the tale. I hate cheaters though. And both of them were cheaters
3/5