All Comments on 'Ultimate Female Exhibitionist Ch. 01'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
Fine Idea, weak workshop

It had started well but after reading it I felt like I'd watched the TV ad in the shortend version. But I believe You can improve. So go on with the story.

Chrissie39Chrissie39over 16 years ago
Only chapter one

A nice story, enjoyed your use of the imp, I know him quite well, he torments me at times, looking forward to chapter two

nudist26nudist26almost 12 years ago

I hope chapter 2 is still coming.

Fixitman8267Fixitman8267over 3 years ago

Last I checked, a laser hair removal clinic was not magic.

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