All Comments on 'Uncovered in San Francisco'

by cielbleu

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nakedguyatxnakedguyatxabout 1 year ago

Builds slow. But that does make it more believable.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

I read the entire story assuming the MC was a female so was surprised at the end. What a glorious slow but intense build up.

nolaguy58nolaguy58about 1 year ago

BlueSky, thank you for sharing this story. I have read and thoroughly enjoyed all of yours and this one is at the top. Would love to hear more of Anne’s adventures

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I've lurked here for decades, I thought I'd start to contribute. English is not my first language, but I do try, really. I actually write most of my stories first in English, then in French.