All Comments on 'Undead Oedipal'

Sparse doesn't cover it. The characters are one dimensional, the whole thing needs to be re-worked and fleshed out, sorry.

Congratulations. Your's is the most incoherent piece I've ever seen on this site.

What was this supposed to be?

Full of spelling and punctuation errors. Too Distracting, stopped reading.

Please don't write anything else. Ever.

Ummm what the hell was that?

What is this even supposed to be about?

Im sorry but was that supposed to be a story? Please try again

i would suggest a total rewrite and another attempt at the story. you covered too much ground connected nothing and left us wondering what was this even about.

Was this talk to text and you have a speech impediment?

I was seriously thinking the other comments were too harsh, and then I read this incoherent abomination and absolute butt-fucking of the English language.

2, I think there was a making of a story in there about like some family dealing with murder but the whole thing was poorly written and with an abrupt ending.