All Comments on 'Under the Influence Ch. 02'

Ah, another slow burner.

Don't betray my expectations

to one of the other posters. you obviously are injecting your own preferences onto this story cause the fact is roughly 1/3 of the worlds population is fine to turned on by smoking. but as for the story it's quite good i cant wait to see how it progresses.

Dear readers

Thank you for all the feedback

I appreciate all comments with constructive criticism

Just a friendly note: The story is not complete, there are many more chapters to come.

Some sexy chest hair for Jack's muscular manly chest? Give Lia something to taste and touch!

Just love the story as it is well written, and the storyline is really interesting and flows well. Can't wait till you publish the next chapter, hopefully soon. 5/5