by Frimbles
It's a shame you didn't continue with this story! Perhaps it's not too late?
Your writing has a really good sence of place to it! Katie is a real jerk but I like how bold she is about it. Interested to see what happens next!
im enjoying it greatly, jus hope she doesnt take it overboard or anything by forcing him to do something...unmanly, or try to "fuck him"