All Comments on 'Underestimating a Dangerous Femme'

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ElvisOmarElvisOmarabout 1 month ago

There were elements of this story I really liked, and the writing style started to draw me into it more, but "The rest of that night is a blur to me."? I would have thought that the stuff you skipped over there is the stuff that most readers are hoping to read. For my taste, anyway.

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