All Comments on 'Understall Ch. 03'

by melodramatic_erik

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63lsmith63lsmithabout 4 years ago
VERY NICE

Another great chapter. I think these 2 should have kept the good thing going.

uniliveuniliveabout 4 years ago

You write really well and this was an anjoyable read, very hot! Thank you ;)

AnonymousAnonymousabout 4 years ago

I think they should have stayed together. I hope they end up not being able to keep away from each other. Great story. Very hot.

ShadowRosieShadowRosieabout 4 years ago
Them

Yes, two good people needing each other. Good for each other. I hope they continue together. It obviously works for them.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 4 years ago
Amazing!

Sad to hear that this is the end for this series since it was so captivating and the story could have been explored more (not to mention very hot). Nonetheless, I totally enjoyed it! Thank you for this! I hope I get to read more of your works in the future! :)

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago

I enjoyed this story. It started to bother me when it became known that it involved a teacher student sexual encounter! We all know how these things can become destructive, even end in catastrophe for all involved, but I found the story to be a very hot fantasy!

Sometimes loneliness can alter ones judgement, as in this case. After the 3rd hot encounter, as taboo as it was, I found myself forgetting how wrong it was for a teacher to allow himself to become involved with his student! I was really hoping that they could somehow make it work and be there for each other!

It was probably best they ended things where they did! Or did they? Could they both be disciplined enough to end something so hot and satisfying, even though it should have never happened in the first place?

Eliminating right and wrong, there was definitely a strong connection between these two lonely guys. I imagine things would be very strained in the classroom from this point on, hard for both teacher and student, in more ways than one!! Hope the writer adds more stories for us all to enjoy! Its been 10 months already! 10 months of a horrible world wide pandemic!

dnsontndnsontnalmost 2 years ago

Second reading, first time commenting. This is a really great coming of age story. The loneliness is palpable. If I could rate each chapter again they would still be five stars.

RobJasperRobJasperalmost 2 years ago

Hot sex & sweet ending. :)

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