All Comments on 'Unearthed Desires'

Holy shit that was hot, can't wait for the next part

Loved it. Can't wait for the next part!

So fucking hot.

Not sure how I feel about the story overall but Im hoping the goth girl gets with the bf and dumps the gf cause she horrible in every way possible

Make alice lick semen from adam's asshole

I hope he leaves his girlfriend! Give him a revenge

I'm really hoping there will be a chapter 2. If not, I'll devise a stradedy to force your hand. The only thing I can think of right now is to start a change.org petition and Trump will make you continue the story jk. On a side note, the anon comments about getting rid of the girlfriend or getting revenge on the girlfriend are beyond moronic. Write your own story so I can not read it. Thank you.

Very well written, like where this is heading. Starting to feel like Victoria only stole Alice from Adam, simply to get her out of the way so she can now claim him. Can’t wait for part 2 to see how this all progresses. Again....great story

The dickgirl bull in a cuckolding scenario is something that I've not read nearly enough of, and this is excellent. Making Alice call her Daddy in front of her boyfriend...Just perfect. Don't give him "revenge" or whatever, let him instead become more attracted to Victoria than he ever was to Alice, and really embrace his role. I'm sure you're going to have him suck her clean and take it up the ass, but I hope you don't write Alice out or something. I hope to see him sucking Victoria's balls and licking her asshole next time she fucks Alice. Looking forward to more!

Great writing! The imagery is tantalizing and I love the foreshadowing. Can’t wait to see where you take this.

I don't think you could write a worse story even if you tried. I don't even have to explain why it's terrible.

You autogynephiles are always good for a laugh. Greatly appreciated.

It was good but could've been better in my opinion

My goodness that was amazing ty.

Please write a second chapter for this great story. Thanks

This is great. I really want to see where this goes. Write a second instalment please.

Please write a chapter two for this wonderful story.

There's not a lot of stories about female cheating with futa but this is definitely one of the best. Great quality of writing, goes really far into the fantasy but manages to avoid anything cringy or weird. I wouldn't mind a 2nd chapter

This is one the best story in genre, can’t wait the chapter two!

This can't be the end!! This has the potential of becoming a fantastic series!!!

More lipstick play for chapter 2 please!!! The descriptions of Victoria's black lips mashing against Alice's pink ones were incredibly arousing. The part where Alice revealed her inner thighs and pussy with all of the black lip markings was just as arousing as well.

Victoria going to town on Alice's womanhood was the highlight of this story. I LOVED IT when Alice begged to get impregnated. The best thing is for Alice to get pregnant with Victoria's baby. I really hope that happens. Goth dickgirls are awesome!

Maybe Alice can get a strap on and she and Victoria can spitroast Adam at the same time. Please update soon! Thanks!

Really excited for what happens next!

I am not a fan of futa on girl ,so I am waiting the chapter 2

The situation here is so good. Great ramping up and overall a great story! Excited to see where this goes.

Stealing GF Sux. plus no ending. wasted read.

This is amazing. Please, please write a second chapter for this. It would be really interesting to find out what happenes next.

Alice is a self absorbed piece of narcissitic shit - she deserves to lose everything.

this might be the most erotic story I've ever read, please write part 2 man, can't leave us on that cliffhanger.

...............please write a second part for this story. It's seriously amazing and has incredible potential. I'm sure I speak for all your readers when I say we'd really enjoy reading a second part to this. Thanks!

Please continue this story!

This was awesome. Victoria is amazing - there's not enough big, muscular, goth futas out there. Really hoping for a chapter 2!

damn this was genuinely a saddening experience. Adam done nothing wrong and i hope if you make a sequel that he gets a happy and satisfying life in the end.

This seem like a start to a good story..need part2

Part 2 please !!!

Really good as usually, but, much, much, too hard on Adam. He does not really deserve to be treated so badly.

Way too harsh on Adam! Maybe V can die?