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Click hereWith that, Cullen stood up, and bid Glynis a goodnight. Glynis then followed Cullen to the door, ready to shut it behind him. If they just turned around, they both would have seen the tear that streaked down Angel's cheek slowly.
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Authors Note:
I am sorry for making this chapter shorter than the others, but I felt this was the perfect spot to stop for the time being. I will currently try to start the next chapter later this evening!
I hope you have enjoyed this chapter. What do you think is going to become of Cullen and Angel? I know that Cullen will have to go through Hell to get back to Angel's good graces. But could you really blame her?
- COMMENTS
spearishabout 11 years agoThis just getting ridiculous.She's fallen down the stairs and has a head bump but he doesn't think to call a doctor to get her checked out ?.Then he blames her when he knows they both have enemies .It's turning in to a complete farce .He isn't protecting her one but as far as I can see and if I was her I'd be on the first plane home!
Anonymousover 11 years agochapter 10 ends with them returning from a picnic (which apparently never happened)
because of the darkness. later, after the stairs incident, she goes out and rides off into the NIGHT on a giant horse she has never ridden? her being an "expert" shows YOUR lack of knowledge of riding a horse: you stated that she rode horses ONLY when on vacations (her family barely makes ends meet! ) , and that makes her an "expert" ?
i guess in wolfworld night becomes day with the wave of an arm, and wishing for something (a horse to ride) makes her an expert. forget the "eerie music" : you need an editor, quickly!!
Anonymousover 11 years agothe absolute absurdity that Cullen would accuse her of "slipping" is so unrealistic! . he should be aware that angel is in danger-actually, he tends to put her in it more than not. he seems to have all the characterisitics of a low-ranking follower--and this is the alpha? when does he plan to show leadership, insight, or any constructive behavior? "eerie music" : that is about the only cliche this "story" lacks : its characters, their development, the plot's events and pacing, and especially the awful grammar just washes out what could be a good story. every writer has to start somewhere; every GOOD writer has a GOOD editor.
goodwillmagicover 11 years agoIt was his witch (with a capital B) stepmother who planted the idea that she slipped. Just another example of how his stepmother truely is.
EuphoriaSlam69over 11 years agoWorst Alpha EVER!!!!!!!! Still can't stop reading this series though :) !
twstdmindabout 12 years agoYou've had these suggestions before: use an editor and use spell check. Every word processor has one so please use it. Taking the extra time to read over your work will work wonders and give you a higher vote score because so far, I haven't been able to give anything more than 2 stars.
Also, Cullen's "Angel, you slipped" does not make sense at all. It doesn't seem unlikely that someone would push her down the stairs since, you know, she received a threatening letter and her brakes were cut off in her car. Cullen's reaction was completely stupid. Please, please, please use an editor. This story has promise. You just really, really, really need to re-read what you're writing. Once for superficial mistakes like grammar, punctuation, and spelling and then a second time for plot and character development.
Anonymousalmost 13 years agoI agree with the evil person. Angel was supposed to die. She was all alone when she was attacked, the evil person was trying to kill her but she got away...not that i am saying it is a bad thing...
canndover 13 years agoI think the person who mentioned that they thought she was mad about the wrong thing isn't considering her personality. I don't believe she'd give up those things if she didn't want to. She was falling for him and wanted to give them a chance. He is acting like a total ass. I know in the beginning he was excusing his behavior due to not understanding women and not knowing how to treat a mate, esp a human who wasn't aware of how a pack works and wasn't going to bow down to him. But he's had time to deal with that. A smart man should figure it out. Now it is just people skills that he clearly has a problem with. Who accuses someone of being clumsy and when they say they were pushed calls them a liar? He knows she has been attacked. He knows her car was sabotaged to try to kill her. Why wouldn't he have guards on her even in his home until he is sure the threat is gone? Why would he treat her like crap when he's so interested in working things out with her. I just am having trouble seeing him as more than an ass. He needs to step up and protect his mate like she said and he has to learn how to treat another person, esp someone you claim is your soulmate. Apologizing to her sleeping self isn't going to suffice. I don't know how many times he thinks he can screw things up and keep being forgiven. Hope you deal with him and get him on the right track there :)
kissntell13over 13 years agoDon't get me wrong, I really, really like this story, but it seems a little strange. She's so upset and heartbroken about Cullen not believing she was pushed down the stairs, but not because he's forced her into giving up her life and interests (pharmacy, etc)? Just seems like in perspective, that's the wrong thing to be upset about.
