by bad_girl69
And it is not left hanging
Not to be oblivious to anyone idiot who would disagree, can I please just start killing them? I really hate obvious bitch/sucking/whores
You have made him into the worst fuckwit EVER! LOL! He's kinda irredeemable. He seems to be good for only two things: fighting and fucking! Relationship FAIL! He keeps on disappointing and upsetting Angel at every turn!
You Sir (or Madame), are an ass-hat and in the immortal words of my Grandfather; "You can take your opinion, and blow it outta yer ass." Enough said.
Very good storyline, plz continue with this world.
Bjorn Gunnar
Please more chapters we need to know what has happened to Isobel.
cati is the sister in waiting. izzy is taken by mistake since none outside knows she is pregnant,now get on with the update.
I started reading on this website not too long ago and just recently I came across alot of rich, interesting stories. Keep the good work up and I look forward to reading the upcoming stories.
I just found and finished your stories in a couple days but I am saddened to see how long it has been since your last post.
Thank you for writing and please post more soon.
We all know school comes first, but you have left your poor readers hanging for over 2 1/2 months. How much more pain and waiting must we endure??? Have a heart?? No christmas present - just cole. Not even a new years gift...
Better chapter. I must say I luv the way you left us all hangin with the cliffhanger and no update in a couple months. It keeps us guessing. School is very important much more important then this story right now. I personally think its eilis that's in on this plot with lysander I think that's his name. I will check back with you in a couple months to see if you've had a chance to update.
Waiting for your update with a big :-).
Wow, you have done a wonderful job at writing. This is how I spent my New Year's Eve, reading your stories. I have to add a beg and PLEASE post another chapter soon. You have me on the edge on my chair. thanks, for sharing your stories.!
I just read it all in one sitting and I love it please post more soon pwetty please (with big pouty face and puppy dog eyes) lol!!
is it soon or has it come and gone ?.. lol this is me waiting for next chapter being patient. :)
omg started reading today and got hooked...NEED TO READ WHAT HAPPENS NEXT... till then good job...funny plot that makes me laugh.
please finish this i have to know what happens with izzy !!!!!! and whose doin all this
I just read the whole thing in one sitting, and it's wonderful!!! I have to admit I'm kind of glad that I'm coming in so late in the game, since I'm not always patient when waiting for updates to stories that I enjoy as much as I do this one. Rest assured I'll be anxiously awaiting your next update. I must admit I'm kind of relieved they grabbed Izzy and not Angel. I think it's a wonderful twist, and should make for a very exciting climax when Angel and Owen realize she's gone!!
i to read all the chapters in one sitting and it was refreshing at the beginning as you jumped from 1st to 3rd person alot i quite enjoyed it, it was your style abit like reading old English with the ye,ayes & thy gets a bit of getting use to but once your in the zone it just flows.. i love your story line i didnt want to turn off my pc till the end so please hurry with the next chapter, very talented girl!
Ms. bad_girl69, if it takes you a whole year to get the next chapter out; I will be here waiting patiently! I'd rather you finish school and continue taking care of the NICU patients, as that is more important than finishing a story for ungrateful assholes!keep doin you, your REAL fans will and can wait for you!
Forget all those haters! They need to learn to live with what you give them or move on to a new story while they wait, or the the people who say its DUMB they can go read another story cuz u don't need them.
I loved this chapter and will be waiting for the next one. I can't wait to see Angel go on a killing spree to find Izzy. Owen and Cullen won't be much better eather lol! So I say let the fun begin! Lol!
i read all of the chapters in one sitting and cant wait for the next one. keep writing, ur awesome at this.
Thank you for sharing your story with us. Please ignore the trolls. I don't know why I think this, but I think Glynis is involved somehow! Keep up the fab work x
We know how life can get crazy but we are happy that you was able to write another chapter, and we will keep a eye for the next one.
Dear bad_girl69,
Just flush those crappy comments down the toilet. I too am antsy to read your next chapter and check back often for new posts, but I would never think you owe me anything sooner than you are ready to post it. You are very talented and busy, so I will gladly wait for the next instalment with your sasy characters!
To the rude whiners:
This site is for fun not life-support. If you can't make it between chapters without getting bitchy and rude, then you have a serious issue that needs your full attention. You're lacking patience, self-control and an honorable conscience that allows you to appreciate that you are not the center of everyone else's world!
bad_girl69,
Good luck with all your work, studying, exams and finding time for sleep...!
Cheers, Nicole
kepp your big yap shut if you can not say some thing nice. So all these Anons should zip it. The rest of us do not care when we have to wait for a GREAT story. We appreciate the authors who take their free time to write for us all to read - free of charge might I remind you. They do not get paid for this. I for one am grateful since I can not afford to buy books. so many thanks bad for writing when you can find time. I will follow your work no matter the time frames. hugs to you
Some anons have their panties in a twist.
bad_girl69 ignore them, yes we all like regular postings but most of us appreciate you have a life. Waiting is hard but so worth it.
As to this chapter, boy oh boy Angel is going to be so mad.
I understand that I had to make you ALL wait for this chapter to be posted, but guess what. My life DOES NOT revolve around literotica. I am a full time student, working a crazy part-time job at the hospital (at hours most of you are still sleeping) on NICU and L&D, and ALSO after all the labs and papers I have to write, I still need to try and fit time to study for the PCAT exam that I will be taking at the end of this year.
I am writing this story just for fun and almost as a challenge to myself. All the fun is getting taken out from all the hate/bitching emails I recieved. I am only continuing because of the other wonderful readers that are here on LIT. If you dont like the wait and are bitching at me about it...then move on to someone else's story. Im not forcing you to read my story.
And to those that are still following me through this long journey, I thank you, and appreciate all the encouragement and appreciation. I especially love hearing all of your guesses (of who is behind all this).
I was sure I left a comment when I read this chapter last night.Sigh!
First I loved this chapter but must say I do get pissed off when so many of his pack show Cullen very little or no respect at all. The way Glynis acts you would think she is in charge (I still don't trust her, she is toooo sweet to the girls and knows to much about what they are doing)and Izzy giving him orders. He is the bloody ALPHA of the pack for gods sake. Hormones or not she had no right to treat him that way infront of their pack. Ok my rant is over for now. LOL
I still love the story. I look forward to the Thxgvn update. I cant wait to see Owen's reaction to Izzy's kidnapping. Excuse my Spanish but f*** what some of these people are talkin about. Update when you can. Your education AND rl come before writing a damn story for Literotica. If you can update sooner, great. If you can't they'll live. Good luck with the school term.
I CAN'T DEAL WITH THIS SHIT WHY SHOULD I KEEP READING UR STORIES IF U CAN'T POST UR SHIT ONE TIME THE WAIT IS TO LONG U SHOULD HAVE FINISH THIS STOREY ALONG TIME AGO BUT NAWWWWWWWWW U LIKE TO KEEP A BITCH WAITING AND THAT NOT RIGHT SO DO ME A FAV GET UR SHIT ON THE ROLL ASAP
Som, this is getting childish, stupidly ridiculous and overly...... What's the word for it? DUMB? Yep. Dumb.
Won't her captors be pissed to have the wrong woman! I can hardly wait to read what comes next!
Wonderful! I've been waiting for this chapter and it was totally worth the wait!
well worth the wait, great job, I can't wait to find out who is behind this whole thing.
and I will be patiently waiting for the next chapter.
*****
POST ANOTHER CHAPTER ALREADY YOU DORK! <3 <3 <3
Forget about school and your classes. Or at least show me a sneak preview of the next chapter hahahaha
KEEP IT COMING!!!
It's fine, we will wait whenever you post another chapter but it better be sooner or you'll have a few people coming after you, bugging you every day until you get soooo tired of us bugging you, and you'll post another chapter just so the emails will stop. And then we'll give you a grace period for about a week before it starts again!!!
Great job!
WAIT.....I only said that to get your attention. As busy as you are I needed a draw for my comments. I had to let you know that as always you have outdone yourself. I loved the whole hormones vs Alpha. Cullen with food on his face, the picture my brain made of that had me LMAO. And what of Angel? Let's just say her on hormones, WOW. And now Izzy has been taken. The kidnappers think they have Angel. It's not Cullen the Alpha they should fear but rather Hormone Angel. Let the battle continue!!
So STAY IN SCHOOL, and whenever you get a chance to update is fine. As all of your fans are saying, well wait. And as for putting this baby to sleep for the final time, I hope you have an idea for your next story. You are way to talented to give up writing all together. Now go crack a book!!!!
Take as much time as you need to get to the end. This has been a very nice and fun read and I am looking forward to see what comes next.
sorry to hear you are so busy with schooling and all but you have still managed to turn out an excellent chapter. I hope that things smooth out soon and will be looking forward to your next chapter once things calm down
i agree with chuckles we will wait dutifully for another of your brilliant chapters. love this story line so much and the characters are just bloody brilliant mate, can't wait to read more.
Don't worry about us, we'll be here waiting for another wonderful chapter. Do well with your studies, we'll be sending good thoughts and lots of energy.