All Comments on 'Unfaithful'

Pleas tell me there will be MORE, MORE, & MORE!!!

Same old comment from the same illiterate jerk! Whoever you are Jerk, go get a life and some English lessons!

This was an excellent story, let's have more!

Author, please ignore the idiot who writes over and over the same comment. You have the beginning of a good story and I'm looking forward to the rest.

I liked that this was a decisive heroine. Her husband was unfaithful, he made a fraud out of the marriage. And she didn't think twice out of divorcing the bastard. Good for her! I hope she took him to the cleaners. I want happiness for this heroine. Wait until Will finds out that she's dating the brother of the slut he has as a slave...

It got a little confusing with all the family hanging around a woman with a recently removed butt plug, I wasn't sure if the whole family was involved or not at first. Yet this was very well written.

I think this requires chapters...We need to know what happens from here..

a slut husband. Would have been better had she gotten him fired and arrested but then who would take care of the kids for her? I have said this in a lot of cheating wives stories and I will in a cheating husband story, trash is trash, always throw out the trash!

its erotic, good plot, and likable main characters. if people think that a small woman cant knock down a big man, think again. im petite, but box better than most men out there.

The story was great from the start. The characters were great too. Can't wait to read more of your work.

Wonderfully erotic story with good writing. I particularly loved the lines: "Suddenly I was feeling old and lonely and divorced and unwanted. It was nice to feel wanted again." It captured the moment and the feeling for me. Thank you.

Thanks for all the positive comments. I was working on part II before the ink was dry on part I, so to speak. Just had to make sure it was okay to put it in print, as a lot of my writings come from my own life. I hope that you all enjoy that story as well.

SpankMe

Please update...I like this story.

this story needs more it just does, wow i love it , i have my fingers crossed there will be more

you soooo need to update this story ohhh my god!!!

Need more of this story !!!! love it :)

i can't wait to see where you go with this story - Bear

You should really write more to this story it is really good. I love it

And with that entry the story began its downfall into the garbage pail. UGH!

an update was promised in 07.

The start had so much potential.

but, you can't read what might have been.

It's rarer to read one from the perspective of a woman of color. I hope that she and Greg enjoy one another's company.

I find "Interracial Love" an odd category, even odder than “anal” – wouldn't that just be another sex tag? Romance is romance. Cheating is cheating. The separate category is for when when people target folks of different ethnic origins for sex -- no emotional attachment, all done for the targeter's sense of excitement from doing something "forbidden."