by Nikkiejanes
Lovely little story of exhibitionism/voyeurism, with a good dose if hot rampant sex thrown in. I was quite pleased that it didn’t turn k to a gang-rape scenario (even if Izzy would have been up for it!)
A bit different than your usual style. Not that I didn't like it. There has to be a follow up story to see if this interesting relationship develops. Please give us a little more background on Izzy. There has to be a reason this happened.
Oops! My opinion on the 'quality' of the writing and grammer (if that's what it ispurporting to be) is not valid because this author does not like interacting with readers who will not give infromation to Literotica and set up an account.
I suspect it is more a case that the author cannot accept criticism on what they write or how they write it. Way too sensitive for my liking. Poor writer in both the use of the English language, and in their need for readers to feel sorry for them and their sensibilities.
Reply to anonymous.
Why should I or any writer for that matter interact with anyone who finds behind the cloak of anonymity.
How do I or any other writer know that the faceless commentor has even seen the reply.
As for criticism, all constructive criticism is welcome.
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I suspect it is more a case that the author cannot accept criticism on what they write or how they write it. Way too sensitive for my liking. Poor writer in both the use of the English language, and in their need for readers to feel sorry for them and their sensibilities.
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Not really my place to buy in, but I'm going to 8n this case. It looks to me more of a case of someone who pref
Comment from Anonymous:
I suspect it is more a case that the author cannot accept criticism on what they write or how they write it. Way too sensitive for my liking. Poor writer in both the use of the English language, and in their need for readers to feel sorry for them and their sensibilities.
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Not really my place to but in, but I'm going to in this case. It sounds to me like more of a case of someone who prefers to be hurtful while safety hiding behind a mask of anonymity. Nikkijanes puts herself and her writing out there for all of us. Her statement concerning constructive criticism strongly suggests the nature of your critique.
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I may be out of line here, but I don
but I don't like to see the how many anonymous critics behave toward writers here.
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Nikkiejanes:
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Sorry for the mess iv
typing on cellphones. I also apologize if I'm out of line here.
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You are free to delete my mess, I don't mean to mess this up so badly.
Fun story. I hope we see more of Izzy. Loved the anal in the shower bit. I hope we see more of Izzy and I hope her neighbors see more of Izzy. Well done.