by DaddyDiaries
The story is well-written, and the plot is slightly different than most. The long build-up to penetration was very good as well as the BJ and final climaxes. I felt sorry for Mark because he didn't get any real action to the very end. I believe the story would be more to my liking, if she had been ravaged by more of the men present.
Your writing matched the fast pacing of the fucking ! Loved the circumstances and the characters. Felt like I was there watching myself. Pretty intense. Bet it causes LOTS of both male and females to get off ! Don't like incest, but do like " DADDY ". 5 STARS