by MissEmmaS
I have just read both of your stories, great starts to both. Hope you carry on as I can't wait to read more. Thank you.
I loved the connection, the electricity, and the boldness! Can't wait for part 2!
Oh the wonder and joy of discovery! I do believe you captured essence of it all quite nicely indeed. Something of a coming of age story like many that have been told before yet still unique in its own right. And something more, you’ve brought your readers inside the story, making them feel a part of the story.
And now… we await more of this tale… to continue the story. Bravo!