All Comments on 'Unresolved Ch. 01'

the chief"s reply should be kiss my ass, you are incompetent in your job.

Glad to see the party is getting started early. A Blassingame possibly connect with a double homicide and the Keystone cops of the FBI (Rover's BAU) coming in only to be opposed by Sheriff Griswold and eventually IC himself, possibly with Muscone in tow.

Well, there will be a few more cases solved and the perpetrators are becoming jail-bait in a few days, unless the corrupt judges take care of that problem.

The FBI-agents (are they really the real thing?) will face a few problems as Jack will slash out against them, but are they just agents of the dark side or also dumb jerks sent in by the perpetrators and/or the corrupt politicians?

WW, glad to see you are back. It seems that the Professor has not been forgotten after all. So many threads to this story, but I am sure you will provide the clues as this progresses.kRYwpF

The next chapter has been submitted, and hopefully will be published soon.

Someone sent me a private message, but as it was from Anonymous, I couldn't reply. That person asked what Order of the Arrow Lodge I was a part of. The answer was written into the stories: the small town at the end of Lake Watchacoochie is named 'Waguli'... which was inspired by O.A. Lodge 318 - Waguli. Just one of many Bowser-approved Easter eggs in my stories. :o)

I dont see how u always come up with these awesome story ideas. They r so entertaining n thought provoking. Love every 1 of them cant never get enough of them or fast enough seems like years between stories. But every 1 is appreciated n i for 1 really do appreciate ur hard work n time. Best Regards

Oh I love it when the FBI come muscling in!!

*****Interesting opening lots of twists and turns. Thanks for sharing.