All Comments on 'Untie Me!'

Clever premise.

Erotic telling of the story.

Good teasing. Good handjob.

But needed some teasing/edging before the rush to allowing him to cum. And dialog about not permitted to cum yet.

And, instead of just talking about her getting into a bikini, showing him her breasts and teasing him with them.

Four stars.

liked it a lot. Could you keep going, another chapter could be fun.

Good premise.

But too rushed.

Of she plaayed with his cock for 20 minutes, it needed details of those 20 minutes. And dialog during it.

Four stars.

God, all you anonymous commenters. With all those ideas for what the author should have said or described, perhaps you should be writing your own stories for Literotica instead of critiquing those who have taken their time to write the stories we get to read for free here. I wrote a 33 chapter story and I know the time and work it entails.

I thought this story was excellent, and I thank vec68 for writing it. Perhaps a sequel?

Needs to continue with both sisters

i liked it. write more.

Awesome story, would love to read what happens next

Great story! Very cheeky, erotic set-up, and nicely drawn characters. Extremely well written too. Thanks for taking the time, and I look forward to reading more stories from you. 🙏

That was a hot and Awesome story you have here. Can't wait to read if there is A part tow and what the oldest Sister has to say too

Great story. Can’t wait to hear if it was planned or something more interesting

Too bad it wasn’t me!

pretty good better if wanking him off had been part of him getting released somehow but good

great story…. how many times with sis sneak in before both admit they knew all along?

Well, maybe Jen and Jacklyn will get together to tease the heck out of him. WOuld have liked to hear what Jen had to say after she waited a few minutes. Hope Jen left him tied up for a couple more hours.

Tying someone up and leaving them there is monstrously dangerous and stupid.

Nice story. Only suggestion would have been to have the GF mention having saved up his cum for later that night. Would make the attempts at restraint more impactful if he knew his GF was building the load for a big pay out.

Excellent quick read!

I love being restrained and at the mercy of whoever is present. This was a fun story and reminiscent of situations I’ve been in.