All Comments on 'Unwound'

It started out okay, but then turned weird and ridiculous.

Amazing story. We must have Unwound 02, 03, etc. So ffing hot. Need to see where this goes for both Adam AND Mike.

I don’t think a story involving hair magically growing is appropriate for this category, it should have been moved to the sci-fi/fantasy category. It feels a bit misleading.

If the bar or a couple of the characters felt familiar, you met them in Untangled.

It makes sense for this story to be in this category, but I’m confused. Did we go forward in time? When they leave the bar, will a decade or more have passed? Or is this just a taste of what the future could offer, kind of like in “A Christmas Carol”?

This story is just extremely confusing overall. Did they get older? Did we fast forward in time? Did just their pasts change? And maybe you should put a sci/fi heads up in the description, because that was very unexpected and a little confusing.