All Comments on 'Up In Smoke, Pt. 02'

I'm really enjoying your story, having worked and lived in the far east it reminds me of my time there. You have successfully captured the essence of the country and reminded me of my time in the far east. It is so distinctly foreign to anything we experience in the west.

I'm looking forward to part 3.

Great story, I hope you're planning more.

Great story so far, looking forward to more chapters :) You do have a few misspellings or wrong words but it is still easy to see what was meant. Very nice!!

Waiting for chapter 3, very interesting so far