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by mdp_2004

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 17 years ago
very erotic

I love the ending especially. Very well written.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 17 years ago
Reaffirmation

I think it is good that Bob and Donna have reaffirmed their love but Bob may want his slave, slut wife to submit to others, maybe even to Master Black as a co-master?

AnonymousAnonymousabout 15 years ago
Thanks

Glad to see more from these two. Enjoyed it.

26thNC26thNCalmost 5 years ago
Master blackhole

Master.black my ass. One more piece of shit from this asshole author.

IFAFILHGIFAFILHGabout 3 years ago
FINALLY ---

someone with some brains and some balls

Just_WordsJust_Words2 months ago

He signed an agreement allowing his wife to cuckold him? I stopped reading at that point.

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