All Comments on 'Utah County Keys'

To be continued?

Where's the rest of it ?

Thank you sir,may I have another?

Barely a story, a bad one at that and definitely in the wrong place. Get a clue.

Are you sure Joseph Smith would approve of this scenario?

Thalia needs to have her cunt filled Mike's cum. The next time she sees the bishop she will show off a baby bump that her lover gave her.

What??? Nah…Mormon, Catholic, Muslim, Hasidic Jew…none of them fall that easily into swinging and the pulling the daughter in…someone gets shot over that kinda shit.

What 1st time wife swapping turns into incest WTF really? Good thing it was short…….

If only there was a Group Sex category for these group sex stories...

Even though this is your 1st story, it really isn't a complete story. If you plan on writing the story of each couple, you should have indicated that, and it would stop the comments you are sure to get about this being incomplete... which it is.

LW is a tough category, and you will take a lot of heat on well-written stories. This one doesnt have that going for it, but the idea could be the basis of a good tale.

You need an editor to help you refine your stories and point out the good AND the bad... if you can accept and act on that suggestion, you'll be much happier with the feedback - and votes - you get.

Wrong category.

Wrong category, should be in incest which would have kept me from reading it. Trash doesn't begin to describe it. Please stop writing or learn how to place your story.

Mormon swingers... about as likely and believable as honest politicians. If they *would* consider this (any of the individual couples) another Mormon family would be the last they'd let know what they were doing.

We are Mormons, live in Salt Lake, and we have a very close group of four couples with whom we regularly swap wives for an afternoon or evening. Or group is not highly unusual, as some may think because of our faith. Many people enjoy fucking other partners than their spouses, and we are no different. We play every couple of months, and I and the other wives are always sore and happy for days thereafter. Keep writing.

Highly improbable and boring like watching paint dry...

Swinging Morons, and naturally there is an anonymous moron swinger with his own little swinging story.