All Comments on 'Vacation Nightmare - Pt. 02'

Surely you can lengthen the chapters.

The chapters are way too short, out of order, missing huge chunks in between so the rest of the chapters are going to be out of order too. You're not Quinton Tarantino.

Great start to what should be a great story. Rock it on. Cheers

Forgot to add I am find the order of your story to be acceptable. Did not bother me that it went backwards to get use up to date. Worked for me. Cheers

I too am okay with telling us how the girls got in the position they are in. I hope we hear a little more about those three year , then how the ended up tied down and what Bob is doing while they are tied.