by seniorperv
A complete pile of dog shit, this is awful. Who told you that you could write? This is like H.S. shit. Grow up and get a life.
You sir are a pig. You have no idea how to treat a woman. If you have a woman of your own outside of this sick fantasy then I pity her. And this story is BDSM notihnig more.
The second story has got substance. It's a fun-filled story, but needs a strong sense of content in it. I would have loved to see more action put into the sex scenes. Still a lovely frolicsome story.