All Comments on 'Valentine Roommate Swap'

by geezzer57

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Time4LuvTime4Luv4 months ago

Was a 2 because I still haven't cum but gave 3 for the effort. Geezzer 57 has it been that long, that you forgot guys 19 to 20 need only minutes if that to recover and be ready to go. Hell I'm 59 and are ready quickly.

AnonymousAnonymous4 months ago

This story would have received five stars if the characters lay down, not laid down. Please review the difference between the tenses for lie and lay. There was also an instance of here missing its final e.

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