All Comments on 'Valentines Day Proposal'

Congratulations!

Romantic and erotic!

This was a lost opportunity for a bit of hard editing....

Very sweet,very cool. Well done,well done indeed.

It's not a story.

Come on — so much more to this piece. Only a touch of sex; loved the feeling/message. More.

Never thought it would happen. Nice, albeit too brief follow up to earlier Carol piece. More?

thank you very much for the nice comments they mean a lot

thank you very much for the nice comments they mean a lot

thank you very much for the nice comments they mean a lot

A lovely gentle love story, but too many spelling errors! Get an editor!