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AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
For future reference

Chia is a type of seed. What you meant was Chai Latte, not Chia (chee-ah) Latte.

fierycougarfierycougarover 4 years agoAuthor
Thanks for the feedback

I share my work here in an effort to improve my abilities. Thank you to the individual who pointed out my chia/chai error- that just goes to show that using an outside editor instead of self-editing is important!

kuroukiphoenyxkuroukiphoenyxalmost 4 years ago
AAAAAAHHHHH

This needs a chapter 2!!!!

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48 year old female who is tired of being normal. I'm bored and lonely, I crave excitement and experimentation with those dark fantasies that most people only whisper about.