All Comments on 'Valerie Spector'

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AnonymousAnonymous9 months ago

I loved it so much ,๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ™‚

Cant wait for the Next chapter ๐Ÿ˜

NEthingGozeNEthingGoze9 months ago

I like the premise very much. Technically the writing is good, but there needs to be a serious edit for misspelling and compound word usage, eg: newspaper, straightjacket, etc. I'd like more detail about Valerie too. Good start though, fun setup, more please.

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I enjoy making erotic and arousing content such as short stories and captions as well as my FMK games. I also like to collaborate with other content creators and accept requests when I have the time. If you have an idea for a story, a request, or a collaboration proposal just ...