by MarkVSharp
I’ve enjoyed this whole series, this is my favorite one yet. Thanks for writing!
Love this story! The opening, the turnaround, Valkyrie's slow, inevitable defeat. Every so often I'll come back to Valkyrie moaning "What a stud!" and just sigh at how perfect her turnaround from dominance to submission was.
Plus, the sex parts are hot.
RE: yankeeman7; glad you've enjoyed it, but just FYI I'm nowhere near done with these. Current plan is I'll keep putting out one-off works until around late February or early March, and then at that point I should be about ready to start releasing a long-form (~10-12 chapter) work with the same characters. So, hopefully you continue to enjoy!
Re: NoComeupance -not much to add, but thanks! Glad you enjoyed it as much in revised form as the original.
Pretty good not clear he knocked them up though so that is the only negative ten out of ten...could have been eleven out of ten with that change.
@Skaddix: thanks for letting me know! Yeah, I try to avoid doing the same thing in every ending, so while the heroine is pretty much always going to get cream-pied whether it actually progresses farther than that is sometimes left ambiguous. Hopefully you'll get some more 11's soon... Thanks for reading!
@Anonymous: You mean right at the end, after the match? Yeah. To be fair to Valkyrie, she does have some rather large subject matter occupying her head right about then...