All Comments on 'Valiant Valkyrie vs the Boarman 11B'

"Thank God it is finally over" ending is my favorite. I hope since now story will become series only if readers voted for it.

Well, it looks like Vestal got what she wanted at least. I fondly imagine that she ended up in charge of the team when her master was busy.

Hey all, apologies it took a while to respond, was focused on some other things for a while.

@Anon1 - to your suggestion - dude not to put too fine a point on it this is my hobby not my job. I'm happy to get feedback and what does and doesn't work for people, but what I choose to write is ultimately what I feel like writing, full stop. Sad to hear you weren't a fan for this one, hopefully the next one will be more to your liking.

@Anon2 - Yep, she did indeed! On the last bit - I didn't specify in the story so I won't say one way or the other now, but I will say that clearly her relationship with Valkyrie has changed a lot, and yeah, she definitely got in 'on the ground floor' with the new overlord as it were.