by TEBJrNghwJqw
And still take a cock, then she’s NOT tight.
This sad story has dragged on far too long. Nobody is interested. Chapter one had over 47,000 views and had a score of slightly over 4. Chapter 18 had LESS than 4000 views and a score of barely 3. Nobody cares. Nobody is going to follow you for 19 chapters. The writing has seriously gone downhill. There's not a single, likable character to root for. Recognize that this story is done and stop posting.
No stars as even giving this drivel one star would be an insult to the star.
Homey, you has some good moments with this, but you are far beyond jump the shark. Your series is now a bankrupt Marine theme park.