All Comments on 'Vanessa the Undresser Ch. 02'

Interesting story!

5

Damn!.......what a twist. I'm so glad you continued the story - more please.

Your nickname should be "The Queen of the Cliffhanger", with the way each of these chapters has ended. If it wasn't enough that Libby (er, Vanessa) was unknowingly fucking her best friend's dad, now we're hit with the news that her best friend's mother is dead. Of course, I'm loving the drama of it all, and I'm quite eager to know what happens next.

Well worth waiting for, and now waiting for more. Fascinating story.

You seem to have a handle on the tension between the characters, and they're an interesting bunch. Ok, get busy with the next chapter!!

5 stars

Great intro and cliffhanger ending.

Needs bigger cocks. Not really believable or sexy unless the cocks are way more enormous.

Great job, Jez! What a surprise ending! And did Jez ever stop at that pharmacy? With this new development, I sure hope I just missed that. Looking forward to the next part later this evening!

Well I wasn't expecting that. Another short but good chapter. Love your writing and hope vanessa gets that pill.