Vanessa the Undresser Ch. 02

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"Geez, he doesn't waste time, I figured he'd ask for your number when I went off to work. Remember, he's a dirty old man, well, not that old really as he and Mum were together from high school and he only turned 40 a year or so back, but still— he loves breasts and you know I know yours are magnificent!"

When we first met Cindy had told me she had to come and talk to me because she was so jealous of my breasts. We'd made out a little when we were drunk during lockdown the year before, but both realised that I wasn't really into it and decided to stick with a friendship instead of complicating things.

Cindy was like no one I had ever met. She was loud and feisty and so outgoing. In many ways we were such an odd couple, me coming from a conservative religious upbringing, her from a more progressive family that did not question her choices. It took me ages to work out how to respond to her temper tantrums, but in the end I either let her calm down or tried to crack a joke to diffuse the situation.

"You should ring him. Then we can head out early and who knows— you might actually pick up tonight!"

"Hey Dad, it's Luce, I'm with Libby and you're on speakerphone. What's so urgent it couldn't wait until the end of my shift?"

"Um, Luce, Libby..." Garry sounded as if he was crying, "There's no easy way to break this, but Luce, I got home to find your mother... fuck. She's dead, Lucy."

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Ravey19Ravey19over 2 years ago

Well I wasn't expecting that. Another short but good chapter. Love your writing and hope vanessa gets that pill.

SouthernCrossfireSouthernCrossfirealmost 3 years ago

Great job, Jez! What a surprise ending! And did Jez ever stop at that pharmacy? With this new development, I sure hope I just missed that. Looking forward to the next part later this evening!

prevackerprevackeralmost 3 years ago

Needs bigger cocks. Not really believable or sexy unless the cocks are way more enormous.

Lovecraft_LoreLovecraft_Lorealmost 3 years ago

5 stars

Great intro and cliffhanger ending.

velcro_zippervelcro_zipperalmost 3 years ago

You seem to have a handle on the tension between the characters, and they're an interesting bunch. Ok, get busy with the next chapter!!

PickFictionPickFictionalmost 3 years ago

Well worth waiting for, and now waiting for more. Fascinating story.

OneAuthorOneAuthoralmost 3 years ago
Wow

Your nickname should be "The Queen of the Cliffhanger", with the way each of these chapters has ended. If it wasn't enough that Libby (er, Vanessa) was unknowingly fucking her best friend's dad, now we're hit with the news that her best friend's mother is dead. Of course, I'm loving the drama of it all, and I'm quite eager to know what happens next.

MikeOrMikeyMikeOrMikeyalmost 3 years ago

Damn!.......what a twist. I'm so glad you continued the story - more please.

Boyd PercyBoyd Percyalmost 3 years ago

Interesting story!

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