Vanessa's Mistake Pt. 02: Fin

PUBLIC BETA

Note: You can change font size, font face, and turn on dark mode by clicking the "A" icon tab in the Story Info Box.

You can temporarily switch back to a Classic Literotica® experience during our ongoing public Beta testing. Please consider leaving feedback on issues you experience or suggest improvements.

Click here

The next day, she was released with a 2-year probation to complete her 5-year sentence. She moved into the guest room in her old house. The girls hugged their mother and showered her with the affection she so dearly needed. Lucas was certain that all the tears from the three women were going to flood the house as he watched and enjoyed the scene.

Lucas never filed the divorce papers after Vanessa's rampage. He knew she was in a bad place during that time and he did not have the energy to finish her off while she was in jail, and he knew that there would be plenty of time for that later.

For some reason, the world seemed right, as if the scales had once again been rebalanced for the first time since the weekend at the resort and Vanessa's mistake. Having her home and seeing their daughters so happy brought a smile to his face. They would have to see how things went from there.

Lucas continued to visit Jackson once a month. The visits became part of his healing process, and knowing that Vanessa had gotten his revenge helped him overcome the pain the couple had caused him three years ago.

Epilogue

After two years of probation, Vanessa was finally a free woman and remained my wife. After a long year living in the guest room, she moved back into the master bedroom and she continued her counseling. The first night I brought her back to our bed, I told her that I loved her but would never forgive her for the hurt and humiliation. I made it crystal clear that if she relapsed or showed any hint of disloyalty, I would throw her out, and divorce would be the least of her problems. It was awkward at first, but by the third time that night, our lovemaking was hot and satisfying. We were together again for the first time since her mistake. Somehow we found our way back and I felt whole again. I never stopped loving this woman and probably never would.

Vanessa never allowed herself to be captivated by another man again. In fact, she would not allow herself to be alone with men and made sure I was with her as much as possible. The actions she had taken, prison, years in the institution, and the loss of her family, led to a profound change in her thinking and personality. Vanessa was now a committed wife and made sure I knew that every second of every day. To be free again and still married was a blessing she would never betray again.

After years of struggle, Vanessa was a new woman. More beautiful than ever, full of love and energy. She never gave me a reason to doubt her love or loyalty. I still make the pilgrimage to see Asshole every month, but now I take Vanessa with me when I visit him to remind him why he's living in the hell he created. We don't talk to him when we visit because we're too busy showing him how much we love each other and who Vanessa really belongs to. Childish? Yes, but don't judge me until you have felt the level of pain and humiliation I've experienced.

Vanessa satisfied my need for revenge. She unknowingly gave out the revenge I desired for the betrayal she and her lover did to me that fateful weekend. The results of here actions were that Jackson would never be able to use his body again and would spend the rest of his days in the hell he had created. The other was a self-inflicted revenge. The violent shooting caused her time in prison, scars from her beatings and three years in the mental institution, followed by more years of counseling for the pain she inflicted on so many people.

Mary remarried and never visited Jackson again. He died a few years later from organ failure and the usual problems quadriplegics have. No one attended his funeral, and he was buried in Potter's Field, a broken, sad man.

Vengeance was sweet, and the scales were balanced. We survived the storm and came out better on the other side.

"Never Lose Today's Happiness by Thinking About Yesterday's Pain"

Please rate this story
The author would appreciate your feedback.
  • COMMENTS
Anonymous
Our Comments Policy is available in the Lit FAQ
Post as:
Anonymous
296 Comments
TassieTykeTassieTyke16 days ago

Fortunately I live in the southern hemisphere, would't like to get on your wrong side!

Bobjohnson1978Bobjohnson197829 days ago

The only thing I can say is he needed to get pay back on the two goons. Plus he did make a police report shouldn’t there have been kidnapping charges cause that’s basically what happened.

oldtwitoldtwitabout 1 month ago

Oh you made this that bit better than the normal of these rich men with more money and a really clever woman who can't put anything out of her mind than a strange cock.

I liked the payback, oh letting the wife back will pull a lot of criticism from the BTB types reading, or just commenting on her, but it's your story and I liked it.

desecrationdesecrationabout 2 months ago

I like that she resisted Jackson and was an unknowing participant in part of the forced cuckholding, but outlining the story at bare minimum, she agreed to the seduction. This to me makes someone untrustworthy. I like that the husband took her back into the house but ideally would have stuck her in an RV in the backyard since in America that is what we do with morons, stoners, weird uncles, and inventors.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 months ago

well written story,but there are events that were introduced where left unanswered(loose ends).There is no way in hell a man would have even had any dialog with, let alone reconcile with any women,never mind a wife,after what you had your MC go through..You as a author must realise fiction to be a success has to be believable. Your ending killed that part,but your writing and story line made it interesting and enjoyable to read..good for 3 stars..JzK

Sailor59Sailor59about 2 months ago

Lots of loose ends as pointed out in previous posts. Can't get past him taking her back after incarceration. It only teaches the wrong lessons to the daughters.

Oatmeal1969Oatmeal1969about 2 months ago

Don't know if that's a good or great story... tough problem to have right? thanks. enjoyed that a fair bit.

just some Minor quibbles like:

tortured missed chances to communicate at the resort when they saw/called each other. Like, why not blurt out you were drugged and did not consent to the agreement, even if you're going to get your ass kicked. try to stop the cuckolding before it happened physically, deal with the emotional affair later.

Then she was surprised by his appearance during the video call from the hospital after driving home with him from the resort.

AnonymousAnonymous2 months ago

I could only give this story a 4 . GW .. What happened to the body guards ? They`` should have been never found as I would have stuffed them thru a log chipper . Then I would have taken the remains out in the ocean . Let the sharks and crabs have something to eat

gprevgprev3 months ago

unrealistic, but enjoyed it. Lucas allowing not going nuclear at the resort, was weak part of story. very weak.

RodzzzRodzzz3 months ago

I would have enjoyed Lucas exacting his pound of flesh from each of the two idiot bodyguards, but alas, it wasn't to be. Even so, it stands to be another great LW story. Bravissimo Cindy.....you did it again.

hogryder2hogryder23 months ago

why lucas did not go after the two body guards. I believe payback was due .

mdadaminmdadamin3 months ago

Unrealistic story

Firstly, I am a follower of your stories, and from my point of view, you are an outstanding writer

But you completely failed in this story

Although the story is well written, there are many errors

1- Why did the husband not confront her when she spoke to him on the phone, and when he met her twice, including once when they were having dinner together, he should have confronted her even if the bodyguard had beaten him because at least He would know her positionو would she have defended him and ended this ridiculous drama, or she would have supported those who beat him, and thus she would show her true color

2- Why did the police not take any action when he went to the hospital and told the story?

3- His wife deceived him when she insisted that he sign a contract of non-disclosure of information and that he signed without reading it, which means that she was sure that if he had read the contract, he would have rejected it completely. Therefore, she deceived him, but the strange thing is that she did not think about what would happen after that when the husband knew what she did.

4- Why didn’t she go with her lover to help convince the husband and see whether he was convinced or not? She let the lover make her think that the husband agreed

5- Why did she not do anything when she saw her husband injured & got into the car with him, and did not even try to inquire about what happened? decided to go home first then go to the hospital? what kind of a wife she is?

6- How can a person with broken ribs drive a car, knowing that broken ribs are one of the most painful things and can cause death?

The author of the story tried to make us sympathize with the wife and wanted us to believe that she had been deceived, she wanted to be deceived in order to calm her guilt

BlueEyd2BlueEyd23 months ago

Not sure this was worthy of a RAAC. Yes, the wife was lied to and MAYBE believed (clearly she desperately wanted to believe) that her husband agreed to her one time affair, but she rubbed it in his face several times that weekend and also took off her own rings and wore her lover's ones.

But overall, another one of your great stories. Thank you!!!!

sneakoneoutsneakoneout3 months ago

Good story however it lost one star because Lucas did not anything to Vanessa the two times they met at the resort.

LechemanLecheman4 months ago

This is one those love/hate stories but it has not stopped me reading it more than once.

Yes Vanessa was an idiot making me ponder about her intelligence, even simple rationality. *sigh*

The MC could have done some real damage to Jackson but only told Jackson's wife, then again, good shooting on Vanessa's behalf solved that issue.

Not too sure about the monthly visits to Jackson though, why would the MC continue to re-live the worst period of his life?

Anyway, enjoyed the story, again.

CluelessCuckCluelessCuck4 months ago

This story is obviously way over the top in terms of believability, but I find it strangely compelling. I despise all the main characters (yes, including the husband), but it provokes an intensely visceral reaction that I really can't explain.

Show More
Share this Story

READ MORE OF THIS SERIES

Similar Stories

An Unexpected Reaction To an unacceptable situation.in Loving Wives
Abandoned Rage Abandoned and humiliated in the worst way.in Loving Wives
Let Go CEO wife fires husband. What follows is the aftermath.in Loving Wives
A Promise Made, A Vow Broken No such thing as a hall pass when it comes to wedding vows.in Loving Wives
The Letter of Destruction The love letter to her husband, leads to her destruction.in Loving Wives
More Stories