All Comments on 'Vegas Ch. 03'

by HallidayTee

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AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
strange

it is strange to see that all 3 chapters have so little response. I liked to read them and the story has a lot fo potential for further development.

BrownCuriousityBrownCuriousityabout 16 years ago
i agree with above poster...

I'm not sure why your work isn't getting more public responses either. It's very entertaining.

happy_blokehappy_blokeabout 10 years ago
Good story so far

I have read 1,2 and 3 and have enjoyed it, it us good you go reasonably slowly. Good sex scenes too, arousing and yet plausible. I was rather hoping that Daniel would show demonstrate better control and loyalty though, I though Katherine had ut too easy.

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