All Comments on 'Victoria & Alex Pt. 05'

Well done. Hope the next chapter will follow soon. It is a nice romance type story that goes beyond gender barrier. Your characters interactions are amazing, well written.

You of course got a 5, because there's no better rating. Love the story and waiting for chapter 6!

glad to see this story continued, looking forward to more of it.

Lovely to see V and A back! What I like most is that this is primarily a love story, it just happens to have a trans protagonist. I'm already looking forward to the next chapter.

Can’t wait. I favorited you so I hope I can get notified when the next chapter gets posted

One of my all time favorite stories. I hope you continue. I enjoy that above all it is a love story. Your character development has been very strong.

I can’t write so I hate to critique, but you ask at the end of each section. So. Once you have described a new sex act or scene. I think you could find a more condensed way of describing the next. I understand that at its heart it’s a sex story. But for me personally it gets a little to wordy. This criticism is not aimed at you alone. It is my recurring complaint of the genre.

Keep up the great work. Thank you.

Another amazing chapter in the Victoria and Alex story. It keeps getting better and better. Anxiously awaiting the next . Thank you for writing such a great story.

Keeping writing, this story needs to continue