by analyst43
The women's actions weren't sexy or erotic. They were just mean and cruel. And the men's reactions just made me laugh. The writing never convinces me that anyone is having any fun or enjoyment. Why wouldn't analbliss simply stand up and bitch slap one of the women? I mean he gets abused, demeaned and humiliated for no reason. Just some whim from some mentally challenged women? At the end this simply isn't fun or entertaining to read. No more chapters are necessary.
He worked his ass off to win for her in ch 1 and this is how 'Lady' Victoria rewards him? I'm not fond of no win situations, but on top of that she's just not watching out for him. Damage isn't always caused by a single event. Poor use of any tool or toy over time may render it inoperable. She's in danger of losing a valuable asset through misuse. Poor analbliss has and is working so hard for her benefit. He deserves better care. A rolled up newspaper for all these self centered and short sighted dommes. He needs a Fairy Goddomme to save him and value him.
A pretty tough contest with severe punishment written into it. I am surprised though that Mistress Victoria has got analbliss drinking her golden nectar for his refreshment already. 4 of 5 stars
This story is soooo hot please continue to write more. You have a gift.
Nice! I would enjoy being paraded naked in front of a group of mistresses like that. I would especially love having suction cups placed on my delicate man-nipples and having having people on stage tweak my nipples.