All Comments on 'Victorious Victoria Ch. 04'

Your writing is fabulous. Keep up the good work.

Think about these simple two things. All he needs to do is ball his fist up and drive it into her throat - crushing her larnyx and killing her. It's simple and a 90# weakling could do it. And when one of those bitches sits on his face? What do you think would happen if he simply bit their clit off? Yeah. Lots of blood and an ambulance ride to the hospital. And he's free and they're in jail. No thought given to consequences.

1 star.

Great story so far! My favorite so far is Mistress Pandora, who gets a laugh and applause from the audience by making him beg for an ass fucking, orgasming from ass fucking him, then giving him a bullseye self facial, and then make him eat it. Wow